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September 6, 2013
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Earlier (Reader is 5 years old)

“Oh, what do we have here?” 2 older boys pushed down the (Hair Color) haired girl, making her yelp. She looked up at them, seeing the evil smile on their faces.  “Looks like we need to teach you the rules of this place huh?” They took a step towards the girl, who backed away in fear.

“Hey!” A voice rang out. A boy about the girl’s age walked in front of her, crossing his arms over his chest. His dark blue eyes were filled with determination, and his chocolate brown hair covered most of his face. “Leave her alone!” The boys chuckled.

“Oh, does she have a little protector?” One of them cooed sarcastically. “So scary!” With a last laugh, the boys left.

“Are you okay?” The boy that had stood up for her asked.

“Y-Yes,” She replied hesitantly. The boy smiled and held out his hand to help her up.

“I’m Jack,” He said, helping her up. “What’s your name?”

“(I-Insert Name),” She said quietly. Jack smiled.

“(Insert Name)…That’s a nice name!” Jack said, beaming. (Insert Name) smiled as well. “Hey, wanna be friends?” Jack said hopefully.

When the mysterious "Eyeless Jack" flees to your house as a refugee, you have no idea just who you've taken in. But soon, you find that Jack is a pretty nice guy. But he seems to be hiding something from you. You begin to question. Why does he seem so familiar? Just who is Eyeless Jack?

I asked if I should post this, and I got a yes, so I did! :iconsuperw00tplz:

XD This is sort of the same deal as Decisions, but I'm not putting other Pastas in it. ^^'

Now to work on a contest entry! (Not telling yet, not CP)

Eyeless Jack belongs to his rightful owner.

Story belongs to CreepyPastaTiem/ Cara B.

You belong to...Jack I guess? XD

Oh. And how fitting. All the chapters are written to this. :I…
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silvervalley67 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The feelz!!!
ZeColourFulPanda Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013 blown
ImJustSomeRandomGirl Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student General Artist

If some 2 year olds were beating me up at the age of 5, I would just shove them off me and scream


Lol xD

FemaleSmileDog Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Doodie pants." I gotta say that when someone pisses me off. I MUST. XD
ImJustSomeRandomGirl Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student General Artist
FemaleSmileDog Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you my friend, for you have given me a fun word to say. -bows at your feet- XD
ImJustSomeRandomGirl Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student General Artist

Lol Thank you!

*Stands there awkwardly with a smile plastered on face*

FemaleSmileDog Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-rolls away in a squid hat-
ImJustSomeRandomGirl Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Student General Artist
-Burst into a bunch of poker cards and disappears-
FemaleSmileDog Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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