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Chapter 1- Left Or Right?

       You practically jump out of your chair. Without hesitation, you click on the video that starts the game. You expected some music. A narrator. But you never would have expected what actually happened. Your screen began to glow a bright white. ((Onhonhonhon do we see some resemblance //gets shot)) You were frozen in fear at what was happening. The whiteness seemed to surround you, almost pulling you somewhere unknown.

You blacked out.

~~This timeskip was brought to you by someone.~~

You groan, your eyes flickering open to see walls of some sort. You look up, and find exactly what you thought; walls. What the-

“Welcome to the Pasta Maze,” A feminine voice said, breaking you out of your thoughts. You looked around, but found no one. “Here, you will need to find your way out, without bumping into a Pasta character. In this maze, you will be met by friendly and unfriendly Pastas. If you happen to bump into an unfriendly one…You may be trapped forever. With the Pasta. Then your death will be described. Enjoy. Now…Left, or right?”

You froze in fear. The Pasta Maze was the game you had been playing on the computer. You couldn’t actually be there, could you? No, no this was all a dream. Yes that was the only possible explanation. Relieved, you go right, and what you see makes you freeze all over again.

The Rake.

Right. There.

It’s just a dream, ___, stop being so paranoid. You reassure yourself in your mind. The Rake then noticed you, immediately jumping up and charging you. Out of instinct you jump away, but you feel…Pressure against your cheek. You stumble as you watch a crimson liquid drip from your cheek, hitting the ground.


You can’t bleed in a dream.

When you find out about an interactive game online called “The Pasta Maze”, you can barely contain your excitement. But when a cruel trick is played, you don’t feel excited anymore. Will you make it out of the maze alive?


XD I'm glad I got this done! :'D

I know what the next chapter is going to be, I can't wait to post it! :iconlaughingplz:

I changed around the opening a bit, so it isn't plagiarism. ^^;

Hope you enjoyed!

Le Pastas mentioned belonged to their rightful owners.

You belong to yourself. ((For now, my friend...))

Story belongs to CreepyPastaTiem/ Cara B.
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MetalBladez00940902 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
SouthParkGirlWriter Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
Roseswerer Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
Actually I have bled in my dream before. I am sorry to say after i died in the dream it was black and my bro had to wake me up. I thought later that day that I would have propably wouldn't wake up at all. It scared the hell out of me. 
seerofheros Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
France GTFO
CupcakesYum1 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hetalia refrence? 
CreepyPastaTiem Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Lucia-Lileth-Vladmir Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Student Writer
This is cool so far. :)
Eyeless-jack10 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*runs in a circle* IM BLEEDING 
seerofheros Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
That may help you by drying the blood and it may get rake to miss you
Eyeless-jack10 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm ok *suddenly stops bleeding* 
soniclover46 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Give me moreee
wolf-gal-sniper Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Artist
More please
savingCapricious Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh snappy snew
animegeek220 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013
Me like
CreepyPastaTiem Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Maddiecat16 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
CreepyPastaTiem Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! ^^
CuddleMuffinZ Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay this seems awesome can't wait for more!! (^_^)
CreepyPastaTiem Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :'D
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