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Chapter 1- Left Or Right?

       You practically jump out of your chair. Without hesitation, you click on the video that starts the game. You expected some music. A narrator. But you never would have expected what actually happened. Your screen began to glow a bright white. ((Onhonhonhon do we see some resemblance //gets shot)) You were frozen in fear at what was happening. The whiteness seemed to surround you, almost pulling you somewhere unknown.

You blacked out.

~~This timeskip was brought to you by someone.~~

You groan, your eyes flickering open to see walls of some sort. You look up, and find exactly what you thought; walls. What the-

“Welcome to the Pasta Maze,” A feminine voice said, breaking you out of your thoughts. You looked around, but found no one. “Here, you will need to find your way out, without bumping into a Pasta character. In this maze, you will be met by friendly and unfriendly Pastas. If you happen to bump into an unfriendly one…You may be trapped forever. With the Pasta. Then your death will be described. Enjoy. Now…Left, or right?”

You froze in fear. The Pasta Maze was the game you had been playing on the computer. You couldn’t actually be there, could you? No, no this was all a dream. Yes that was the only possible explanation. Relieved, you go right, and what you see makes you freeze all over again.

The Rake.

Right. There.

It’s just a dream, ___, stop being so paranoid. You reassure yourself in your mind. The Rake then noticed you, immediately jumping up and charging you. Out of instinct you jump away, but you feel…Pressure against your cheek. You stumble as you watch a crimson liquid drip from your cheek, hitting the ground.


You can’t bleed in a dream.

When you find out about an interactive game online called “The Pasta Maze”, you can barely contain your excitement. But when a cruel trick is played, you don’t feel excited anymore. Will you make it out of the maze alive?


XD I'm glad I got this done! :'D

I know what the next chapter is going to be, I can't wait to post it! :iconlaughingplz:

I changed around the opening a bit, so it isn't plagiarism. ^^;

Hope you enjoyed!

Le Pastas mentioned belonged to their rightful owners.

You belong to yourself. ((For now, my friend...))

Story belongs to CreepyPastaTiem/ Cara B.
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Actually I have bled in my dream before. I am sorry to say after i died in the dream it was black and my bro had to wake me up. I thought later that day that I would have propably wouldn't wake up at all. It scared the hell out of me. 
seerofheros Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
France GTFO
CupcakesYum1 Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hetalia refrence? 
CreepyPastaTiem Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

This is cool so far. :)
Eyeless-jack10 Oct 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*runs in a circle* IM BLEEDING 
seerofheros Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
That may help you by drying the blood and it may get rake to miss you
Eyeless-jack10 Oct 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Hmm ok *suddenly stops bleeding* 
soniclover46 Oct 7, 2013  Student Artist
Give me moreee
wolf-gal-sniper Oct 7, 2013  Student Artist
More please
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